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My offline edit looks good, I feel like the video flows well. There is a clear storyline and the special effects looks real.
Focus Group Imogen Ranner: "It looks good, however I do feel like that it doesn't really fit the aesthetic, maybe try adding a filter" Anna Burnley-Davis: " The transition between your acting changing back to normal, maybe try a different transition. Also, I feel that the wand shot is too long" However, when I showed this to my focus group they stated that I should add in a filter. Mainly because the feel that without a filter it doesn't fit in with aesthetic and atmosphere, they said adding like a dark filter, to make it look darker and deeper. They also said that that the transition between my actor changing doesn't fit in and doesn't look right so I will have to change that. They also said that the shot of the wand fall is too long and that I should shorten it. For my online edit I will do all of these and I will make sure to add in my visual effects. |
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